They say life is good, or life is bad,
That life is beauty, hard or only sad …
Some people gloat while others cry,
Some are born while others wave goodbye.
We always fail to rise, we’re going worse
Making truth sound only as a joking curse,
We often pray, wondering about our meaning,
Trying to joke, only to end in greaving.
I once tried to take control, tried to lead
My own life, reach my purpose, and succeed,
To end the fear, to end the things that hurt …
To realize I couldn’t, no matter what the effort.
I was not supposed to carve my life in stone,
Nor to feel compelled to work it on my own …
It all became so visible, so clear and bright
At that moment when I caught you in my sight.
Some green eyes in which to lose yourself,
Sincere and big and of unmeasured depth …
A pretty smile and queen-like attitude,
An angel’s beauty that could not be argued.
She learned from me all there was to learn,
She taught me how to live and not to yearn,
She made me feel, and as the feeling grew
I now know I need to tell her “I love you !”
for zuzu
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octombrie 26th, 2008 at 5:32 PM
Mi-ar place mai mult daca ar fi dedicata pt.mine.Poate urmatoarea,ce zici?
noiembrie 3rd, 2008 at 12:01 AM
Poate … doar nu o sa incep sa te contrazic chiar asa aiurea
Daca as fi un poet adevarat, probabil ca as face poezii la comanda … sunt doar un poet de ocazie si scriu ce simt. Concluzia e destul de clara : nici macar nu te cunosc, deci ce poezie sa-ti dedic ?
noiembrie 4th, 2008 at 9:27 PM
Deci sa inteleg ca n-am nici o sansa?
O sa ma multumesc sa-ti citesc alte poezii daca le mai scri si sa ma gandesc cum ar fi sa fie pt.mine.Poate cine stie…vei fi mai curios sa ma cunosti. 
noiembrie 5th, 2008 at 4:29 PM
Daca te multumesti la a-mi citi (posibilele) viitoarele poezii care le voi scrie, de ce as fi asa curios incat sa vreau sa te cunosc ?
In alta ordine de idei, intr-adevar, daca nu te cunosc, mi se pare normal ca n-ai nici o sansa
noiembrie 5th, 2008 at 4:55 PM
Am crezut ca-ti plac provocarile
;poate m-am inselat…Macar ai fost sincer .
noiembrie 9th, 2008 at 1:43 PM
impresionanta poezie
,felicitari..
noiembrie 9th, 2008 at 6:11 PM
Multumesc.